Wednesday, November 14, 2012

Ex 3.2

Brianna Ruiz
English 115
Professor Overman
November 13, 2012
Accomodation
The sun had centered itself overhead, beaming down on the city of Winnetka. Even though it was a quarter to twelve, the time it was said for the weather to reach its high point, the sun kept its power soft. The wind was not so kind and made a victim to those who dared to step out without a jacket on, a sign that fall was here. Luckily for Brent Staples, an editorial writer for the New York Times, he had dressed in layers in preparation for the weather at the park.
On his way over to the bleachers he marveled at the scene around him, taking in the light atmosphere that hung in the air. To his left he could just make out three children engaging themselves in the playground they now took over. Their parents he guessed were the couple sitting on a bench just a few feet away, glancing every so often during conversation as a protective reflex. To his right were a handful of people scattered about, some laying on the grass soaking up the sun others playing with their seemingly friendly dogs. As he smiled at the simplicity of the scene, his attention was drawn behind him when a sudden tap on his shoulders caused him to turn to his expected friend.
“Stephen Dunn,” said Staples smiling, “You’re early. I was expecting you to arrive in a little over twenty minutes.”
“I thought I’d get us something to eat on the way over,” he said lifting the Subway bag. The wind blew against him with such a force that he almost dropped the sandwich he was handing Staples, who scoot over to give him room to sit. “I left early thinking ordering would take some time. Nothing special, just some turkey and cheese. I toasted them both on account of the weather, nothing tastes better on a cold day than a warm sandwich.”
“Except soup,” Staples countered staring off into the distance,” But soup takes a while to cool down before you can eat it.”
“True. So what’s the reason you called me out here for? Is there something on your mind?”
Staples looked over at his fellow scholar then back to the field. He took a bite out of his sandwich, swallowing its contents before clearing his throat and responding. “I’ve just been needing to go someplace unfamiliar and bring something with familiarity. There aren’t many peaceful places I can hold a conversation with you and I just wanted to catch up a bit.”
“Well you chose a peaceful place alright, the air is a nice temperature and there doesn’t seem to be people in a hurry to whatever life calls them for. It’d be wishful thinking for all parks to be this way wouldn’t it? Not having the slightest care in the world, even for a moment. It’s just you and the space surrounding you, with a gentle tune of relaxation playing in the background.”
“Until someone walks by or even walks in. Then your space is violated, maybe even offended and you need to reestablish your sense of safety.”
“Reestablish how? If that space is sacred to you there is no need. You know the place already, there’s no reason to fix the measure of safety when you know it’s already there.”
“Not with me, with others,” Staples said flatly,” They’re the ones you need to make feel safe again.”
You need to make them feel safe again?” Dunn chuckled,” My apologies but it’s not your fault society assumes the worst in us. I don’t see the reason for me to learn cheerful tunes to whistle simply because people would rather judge me than get to know me.”
“Well you have that luxury Dunn. Unless you dressed yourself as a grimy hobo, no one would take a second glance at you with concerns for their well-being.”
“Even if they did, I wouldn’t accommodate myself to their stereotypical prejudiced assumptions. Unless I have shown them proof of being classified as a threat, I shouldn’t be taken as one. Simple as that.”
“It isn’t about accommodation and we both know everyone is prejudicial. It’s nature. We have no way around it no matter how well we’re raised.”
“As true as that may be, there is still that choice to drop those thoughts the minute they come up. Lets say whistling didn’t help. What then? You’d have to go out of your way at that point in order to make those around you comfortable.”
Staples sighed. It wasn’t a sigh of defeat, but one of exhaustion at the subject. He knew Dunn wouldn’t back down if the conversation continued from here and decided to agree to disagree. He shifted himself against the cold metal and with a tired smile asked, “How about we go play some golf?”
Work Cited
Staples, Brent. “Just Walk on By.” Convergences. 3rd ed. New York: Bedford/St. Martin’s, 2008. 331-34. Print.
Dunn, Stephen. “The Sacred.” Convergences. 3rd ed. New York: Bedford/St. Martin’s, 2008. 331-34. Print.

Monday, November 5, 2012

Ex 3.1

Brianna Ruiz
English 115
Professor Overman
November 4, 2012
Breaking through the Walls
            You shouldn’t have to accept what is not right. When a problem occurs or you see the changes in behavior towards you, you should not settle with it. Say something, let people know you are not there to hurt them or cause any unnecessary trouble. No matter how long it has been and how ordinary it feels, you should take a stand and not accept the ill ideas driven towards you.
            Such is the case with Brent Staples in Convergences. As a black man new to the scene of New York, he experienced many moments of fear towards him even before the move. The article opens up with him recalling his first “victim” to the harsh stereotype that befalls his culture. This was his first moment of realization. The first moment he truly experienced and realized the intimidating concept around him. Upon further reflection he notes that he is “indistinguishable” from muggers and the idea of being dangerous in itself is a danger to him. Being seen as a threat, he explains, is and can be the difference between life and death. Walking into a building and seemingly harmless will let you pass through to your destination without hesitation. There is an unlikely chance that you will be stopped and searched or questioned at every turn whereas a menacing person is continuously questioned. If you walk into a building and unknowingly give off an air of menace you will have glances, maybe even stares full of concern. You will most likely see a few people turning to their phones in a worried hurry to let someone know about your presence. Not even five footsteps later you will have security standing directly in front of you, asking your reason for being here. That is the difference.  Having an approachable air around you is the difference between getting someplace with ease or going through a task with hassle.
 Staples also read about the situations of others, recalling stories that he deemed worse than his. He read about another journalist who was mistaken for a murderer. Not because their descriptions were similar and not because he was indentified by a witness, but because he was inquiring about the story. With this, police officers tried arresting him and failed almost begrudgingly due to the fact that the man had his credentials. Staples connected with this and notes “black men trade tales like this all the time” (333). Having shared the story with us, he explains and provides us with examples of the commonalities found with his ethnicity.
What surprised me was that he accepted this unreasonably standard concept surrounding him that only really went skin deep. He let it alter him and become aware of himself. Giving him the idea that fitting in was a challenging battle to be fought and he was just a survivor. It was not until later that, after seeing that a change in his appearance would make no difference, he would carry out tunes that were melodious and recognizable. This “solution” made sense to me, as I agree with Staples that a person with ill intentions would not care for bright tunes.
            Still, after reading the article and seeing that Brent Staples avoided rather than solve the problem bothered me. Yes, it is common to judge but that judgment can only go so far before you hurt someone. My stance is to clear any misunderstandings from the situation and go from there.